Hey guys, sorry I missed today's class, migraines are a pain >.<
Anyway, I wasn't exactly sure what all you wanted me to mention in the paragraph, but here it is... let me know what changes you wanna make to it:
"The graduating class of he IUS Fine Arts division cordially invites you to the opening event of our gallery, "Eclectica", in memory and honor of the former Preston's Arts Center of New Albany. We sincerely hope that you will join us and witness the fruits of our labor, talk with the artists themselves, and enjoy the celebrations of the evening."
Feel free to add or subtract anything you see fit.
Senior Seminar: An energetic and creative group of individuals exploring a broad range of concerns vital to art majors, including the planning and eventual installation of a professional senior exhibition, contemporary theory, graduate schools, career options, approaching galleries, collaboration, and why we do what we do.
How about these revisions: "The B.A. graduating class of the IUS Fine Arts program cordially invites you to the opening reception of our exhibition, "Eclectica", in memory and honor of the former Preston's Arts Center of New Albany. We sincerely hope that you will join us to celebrate the fruits of our labors, talk with the artists and guests, and bid farewell to our beloved art supply store"
ReplyDeleteThat sounds great to me =)
ReplyDeleteSounds great! Perfect, short, sweet and to the point.
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